Hello angel my name is Jedi and I am from yaldhurst model school, I really like your slide about W.I.T.S it is very fun to unique and interesting. I didn't really get how readers would know that this slide is about your W.I.T.S. You only know when your at the end of the slide. So maybe next time try and add a title and explain your story. But overall it was a cool slide.
Hello angel my name is Jedi and I am from yaldhurst model school, I really like your slide about W.I.T.S it is very fun to unique and interesting. I didn't really get how readers would know that this slide is about your W.I.T.S. You only know when your at the end of the slide. So maybe next time try and add a title and explain your story. But overall it was a cool slide.
Hi angel I am maddison at YMS I am a year 5 and that was a very good slide and a very good anmachen what would you do if you got in that sichuan would you do the same or would you do the right thing?.
Hello angel i'm Nikita from YMS and i'm a year 5 and i like how you included animals and their was a lot of running in this but its really cool and come check out my blog and some of the other people in my class blogs.also why did you chose to add and use stickmans and a dog?
Hello angel my name is Jedi and I am from yaldhurst model school, I really like your slide about W.I.T.S it is very fun to unique and interesting. I didn't really get how readers would know that this slide is about your W.I.T.S. You only know when your at the end of the slide. So maybe next time try and add a title and explain your story. But overall it was a cool slide.
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Jedi
Hello angel my name is Jedi and I am from yaldhurst model school, I really like your slide about W.I.T.S it is very fun to unique and interesting. I didn't really get how readers would know that this slide is about your W.I.T.S. You only know when your at the end of the slide. So maybe next time try and add a title and explain your story. But overall it was a cool slide.
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Jedi
Hi angel I am maddison at YMS I am a year 5 and that was a very good slide and a very good anmachen what would you do if you got in that sichuan would you do the same or would you do the right thing?.
ReplyDeleteHello angel i'm Nikita from YMS and i'm a year 5 and i like how you included animals and their was a lot of running in this but its really cool and come check out my blog and some of the other people in my class blogs.also why did you chose to add and use stickmans and a dog?
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