This is me and Mia's DLO .we created it to show you how to take care of your chromebook.
We had fun creating this dlo.The thing i found hard was that we had to end it we just wanted to keep going. im going to make sure that i will take care of my cromebook and that others will as well.
malo a lelei my name is losalio and I really liked the way you laid everything out and I like the colour of the slide show it looks really realistic and the the font was really good and it was just great
ReplyDeleteHello Angel, my name is Lenard and I am from St. Patrick's School, Greymouth. I really like how you put humor into your slideshow, I found it funny a little. Your slideshow is humorous and I really liked the animations you put in. Maybe though you could check what you're writing because you put ur instead of your. Anyways, I hope you have a good day!
ReplyDeleteHello Angel my name is Sarah I am from saint Patricks school, I love the creativity that you and Mia put into this DLO it was amazing, also I loved the way you and Mia created something for every age to understand. The only thing you need to fix up is your spelling because you put ur instead of your, but apart from that it was super.
ReplyDeleteHey Angel, my name is Tabby and i'm from St Patricks school. I really liked that you added humor into it, I also liked that you made it into a little animation. Good job and keep up the good work! :)
ReplyDeletethank you
DeleteHey Angel, my name is Leevy and Im from St Patricks school in Greymouth. I really enjoyed your presantation and It made me want to see more. Maybe next time you would show what the right thing looks like. Well done!
ReplyDeleteKia Ora Angel, My Name is Jack and I am a Yr 5 student at Paihia School. I thought that your post on how to treat a chromebook was funny!! I thought the one with the ‘Never drink near your chromebook” was really,5 really funny!! When I was looking at your presentation I thought that It was less than 54 slides because I thought that it was only 10. Keep up the good work!!!
ReplyDeletethanks for all your nice commnents
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