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Saturday, December 21, 2019

day 2 activity 2 week 1 slj

for this activity I have to write a poem about what Neil Armstrong would have felt when he first stepped on the moon.
stepping out of Apollo 11 you could see for miles
of just space it was amazing
when I took that first step
I knew I was making history
as I stuck the american flag in the moon
I knew I was representing my country
the whole world was watching


1 comment:

  1. Kia ora Angel,

    How are you today? I hope you had a nice christmas!

    I really enjoyed reading your poem. I like how you included facts, like the name of the spaceship, and what Neil Armstrong might have been thinking, knowing that he was making history!

    What do you think that would have felt like, to do something for the first time EVER? That's pretty crazy to think about!

    Maybe next time you could include some colours or images? Google slides and google drawings are good for this!

    Keep up the great work :)

    Ngā mihi,
    Tayla

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