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Wednesday, July 4, 2018

My Narrative Writing

Hello today we have been doing narrative writing WOHO . This piece is my one its called FLY HIGH. You really should read it (follow meh). What i found hard was coming up with this idea. What i found easy was WRITING IT DOWN so easy. so thats what i did today

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  1. Nice story Angel! I like how you added an animation in at the end! you have a great imagination!

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  2. Hello Angel, I'm from St. Patricks School and your story was Outstanding and the animation was great but maybe you should maybe put some commas on your sentences.

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  4. Hello, Angel My name is Kinae and I go to St. Patrick's school. I could see that you went over your work and checked your spelling but maybe I would of put more time into it and put some full stops and commas.

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