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Title:   Fox
Classification: Tells what the object or animal is, who the person is or where the place is.	The fox family is the dog family it is related to cats but it's more related to the dog family then to the cat family. It's scientific name for fox is vulpes they gave it this name because it's fancy. There are 31 species of fox here's three. grey fox, kit fox arctic fox and that's it. Foxes live everywhere except china because it hasn't been sent there yet.
Description: Use paragraphs with topic sentences to organise the different bundles of information Object - size, shape and features, dynamics , where it is used or found. Person - Characteristics, where they live, what they do, achievements. Animal - appearance, habitat, behaviour, breeding, diet. Place - size, facts, features	Behaviour: the fox is nocturnal  it mostly comes out at night. It only comes out at day sometimes when it is hungry. Foxes can also dig really deep when they're in trouble or when they bury their food Diet: The fox is an omnivore includes fruits, berries and grasses. It also eats birds and animals like squirrels , rabbits and mice . Habitat: foxes mostly live underground so they won't be seen by hunters or other big carnivores. Breeding/ Life Cycle: the life cycle is pup juvenile then adult.  They mate from january through to march they have a litter to about one or ten kits there not called pups there called kits. Facts: 1.A group of foxes is called a skulk or leash 2.foxes have whiskers on their legs and on their face 3. Foxes can retract their claws like a cat does 4.a male is called a dog fox when a female is called a vixen
Conclusion: You may want to make a personal comment about the subject of the report